{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"65117720","dateCreated":"1385328217","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"juniuswright","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/juniuswright","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1226023806\/juniuswright-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/lilyfrain.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/65117720"},"dateDigested":1531978134,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Mr Wright Feedback","description":"Great poem.  Your poem reflects on a piece that at first I dismissed, but seeing it in the exhibition I loved it more and more.  Your poem explores some of the mysteries that this piece has stirred in my mind.  <br \/>\nI have but a few suggestions that might make the poem better (or worse).  A stanza break after the following line<br \/>\nLight and air pass through my dismantled skin-<br \/>\nMight help the reader focus more on the I's that follow.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nA stanza break after the following line,<br \/>\nMy body is wire fencing for the soulless. <br \/>\nMight force the reader to linger longer on this wonderful line.  <br \/>\n<br \/>\nWonderful writing.   I look forward to hearing Renee's reaction to it.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}